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Determine who your intended audience and then ask yourself the following:
This reduces the work they need to do to understand and points them in the direction of how they will use your information.
Example 1: Ineffective
Participants are advised to inform themselves of the operational procedures and eligibility prerequisites prior to the beginning of the program.
Explanation: Example 1 is ineffective because the sentence has several points and uses complex language which may make the message more difficult to understand.
Example 2: Effective
Before the program, read the requirements to learn whether you can participate. Then, read the instructions to learn what you will need to do.
Explanation: Example 2 is effective because each sentence has instructions that are direct. This makes them clearer and easier to follow.
Example 1: Ineffective
The ISO is an NGO that creates and publishes international standards for twelve diverse sectors including health, food, and engineering.
Example 2: Effective
The International Organization for Standardization (ISO) is a non-governmental organization (NGO) that creates and publishes international standards for twelve diverse sectors including health, food, and engineering.
Example 1: Ineffective
When plain language is used, the word choice must be adapted to those who will be reading the text for seamless understanding.
Explanation: Example 1 is ineffective because the passive voice and formal phrasing can make the main point unclear.
Example 2: Effective
Choose vocabulary with your intended audience in mind.
Explanation: Example 2 is effective because it is written in an active voice, which speaks to the reader directly.
Writing in plain language can also affect the organization of your work. For example, writers can implement plain language:
Example 1: Ineffective
Participants will be requested to provide thorough responses to the survey questionnaire by the set deadline, ensuring that all applicable sections are completed and that any additional feedback regarding their experiences is included in the designated input areas.
Explanation: Example 1 is ineffective because all instructions are grouped into one paragraph, making each step unclear. This makes it harder for the reader to identify what they need to do.
Example 2: Effective
Please complete the following steps:
Explanation: Example 2 is effective because it uses heading and bullet points to separate each instruction. This guides readers to quickly know what they need to do, in order that it should be followed.
Resources
Accessibility Standards Canada. (2025, October 16). CAN-ASC-3.1:2025 – Plain language. https://accessible.canada.ca/standards-and-technical-guides/standards-and-technical-guides-database/can-asc-312025-plain-language
Centre for Plain Language. (n.d.). Getting started with plain language. Centre for Plain Language. https://centerforplainlanguage.org/learning-training/getting-started-with-plain-language/
International Plain Language Federation. (n.d.). What is plain language? International Plain Language Federation. https://www.iplfederation.org/plain-language/
Annabelle Ly, Writing Services, Wilfrid Laurier University, CC By-NC 2026